Another Publishing Industry Scandal: “Margaret B. Jones” and Love and Consequences

www.inkthinkerblog.com — Do we need to review the difference between fiction and nonfiction here, people? Fiction is something that didn’t actually happen, whereas nonfiction is true or real. If you write a book that didn’t actually happen, it’s fiction. Please forward this memo to James Frey, Margaret Seltzer, Misha Defonseca, and Laura Albert, four people who clearly don’t get the difference between these two classes of writing.

Seltzer, who published the so-called memoir Love and Consequences under the pen name Margaret B. Jones, claimed to be a half-white, half-Native American foster kid who grew up in South Central amid gang bangers and drug dealers and survived against all odds. Great story, except that it’s not true. Sheesh, people. Shame on you, Ms. Seltzer, for misrepresenting yourself, and shame on Riverhead Books for not picking up the flipping telephone and doing a little background checking. After James Frey, there is no excuse! If something is being presented as a memoir, you’d better make darn sure there’s some iota of truth to it. Um, duh?

Read about it here:

What do you think about this recent trend in presenting fiction as fact? Why aren’t these authors just submitting novels instead of coating their work with the patina of truth and becoming publicly humiliated big fat liars? I think there’s a difference between performing as a persona (think Larry the Cable Guy, who’s actually comedian and actor Daniel Lawrence Whitney) and pretending to be something you’re not. Do you agree or disagree?

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Angry Journalists Follow in the Writing Frump’s Footsteps

www.inkthinkerblog.com — Apparently this anonymous online venting is growing in popularity! Writing Frump will probably always be my favorite, but AngryJournalist.com may be a close second… Its beauty is in its simplicity.

(hat tip to Star for the heads up)

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March 4 Is National Grammar Day!

www.inkthinkerblog.com — Ladies and gentlemen, boys and girls, writers and communicators of all persuasions, today is your day. National Grammar Day, designated March 4, 2008, by the Society for the Promotion of Good Grammar and MSN Encarta, is all about promoting good grammar. And since we are professional communicators, you know, since we’re writers and all, we should be very concerned with this particular observance.

Today, keep an eye on your grammar. We’ve gotten lax here in the US, saying…

…”Who are you calling?” instead of “Whom are you calling?”

…”It’s me” instead of “It is I”

…”I wish I would have known” instead of “I wish I had known”

…”like” instead of “such as”

…”Who you talking to?” instead of “To whom are you speaking?”

…”irregardless” instead of “regardless”

We write…

…”its” when we mean “it’s”

…”they’re” when we mean “their”

…”Oreo’s” when we mean “Oreos”

…”they” when we mean “he or she”

…”which” when we mean “that”

Misplaced modifiers, comma splices, and dangling participles abound, and don’t get me started on people who start sentences with conjunctions (ahem, ahem). It’s a scary world, grammatically speaking.

Now, let’s be honest: Some of this stuff is just the way people talk. The next time you call your best friend, are you really going to say, “It is I?” Probably not. But there’s no excuse for saying, “I got concert tickets for you and I.”

What’s your favorite grammar pet peeve? I have too many to list, but suffice it to say that “irregardless” and “if I would have…” are in the top five.

For more grammar tips and annoyances, and to laugh at the ignorant, check out these language-related blogs:

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Winner of the January Favorite Query Contest!

www.inkthinkerblog.com — As a new feature of this year’s Inkthinker Query Challenge, I’m running a monthly mini-contest for the best query of the month. There were four entries for January’s queries, and the winner stood out for three key reasons:

  • The lede. The winning querier jumped right into the meat of the story.
  • The tone. Professional but conversational, and a good preview of what the story itself will sound like.
  • The closing. Short, sweet, and to the point. Great summary of previous publications, but not self-important.

Congratulations to the winner, Kara Williams. Kara wins a $10 Amazon.com gift card to put toward her freelance writing library.

Here’s the winning query:

In 2006, Aspen, Colorado, mom Merle O’Brien was perfecting downward dog poses in her yoga class and started thinking about what her mat was made of — mainly PVC material, a decidedly non-environmentally friendly product. In the manufacturing process, scraps of yoga-mat material end up in landfills and stay there for years.

Within months, she’d contacted yoga-mat manufacturers to acquire the scraps and have them re-purposed into incredibly cool and hip handbags, clutches, yoga-mat bags and totes.

Merle’s home-based company, OLovesM, has taken off in the last year, with fans from all over the country. I wrote about these bags for a local tourist guide (I live near Aspen), but I think Yoga Journal’s readers would love to know about them, as well, namely because Merle is launching the online-shopping feature on her website soon (check out OLovesM.com).

Could you use a short piece in “Om” about the the OLovesM bags? They come in nifty designs, including the all-natural “Jute” collection in a classy natural shade and lined in Fair Trade hemp and cotton. Other styles are brightly striped or feature fun, geometric patterns. The bags range from $15 to $200.

I’m a longtime journalist with dozens of articles in national and regional magazines, including Working Mother, Every Day with Rachael Ray, Aspen Magazine, Aviation for Women, 5280, Mountain Parent and Chesapeake Family. Please learn more about me at www.karaswilliams.com.

Thanks for your time!

Best,
Kara Williams
Freelance Writer/Editor

Want your own Favorite Query prize? All participants in the 2008 Inkthinker Query Challenge are eligible to enter the Favorite Query Contest each month. Just submit your favorite query via e-mail between now and March 15, and you’ll be entered to win. I’ll pick my favorite and post it here at Inkthinker, and you’ll get a snazzy gift.

Not a Query Challenge participant? What are you waiting for? Sign up using the form at the top of this page.

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February 2008 Query Challenge Success Story: Beth Morrissey

www.inkthinkerblog.com — From Beth:

I just wanted to thank you again for hosting the 2008 Query Challenge. I made up my own sub-rule for this year in which I stated that I would use half of my queries on new (to me) markets. In the first two months I’ve cracked five new markets and one of them was on my dream list! In fact, my dream market bought one of the two short samples I sent in and has since assigned me three more. Two other dream markets have each given me a “maybe” for the time being, so keep your fingers crossed for me! As if that weren’t great enough, one of the letters of introduction that I sent out also netted me a speaking engagement. It’s been a great year so far, and your Challenge has played a big part. I can’t wait to see what else the year has in store for me.

You’re welcome! It’s so exciting to hear that the Query Challenge is helping you to set and reach your personal writing goals. That’s what it’s all about!

Do you have a success story to share? E-mail Kristen!

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